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1.
witnessed by stars
cheshire cat
smiles
2.
snow discovery!
kitten dislikes
cold taste
3.
lolling by fire
paws tickle
warm air
4.
mew from kitchen--
empty bowl, again
5.
a cat does not
appreciate
delicate rose petals
6.
window protection
the cat watches
curious world
7.
Little black cat,
lily pollen:
orange stripe
8.
wicked claws strike
on unsuspecting terrier.
9.
slumbering prowess:
it’s a hard
life
10.
yellow eyes yearn,
paw pads
koi pool waters
witnessed by stars
cheshire cat
smiles
2.
snow discovery!
kitten dislikes
cold taste
3.
lolling by fire
paws tickle
warm air
4.
mew from kitchen--
empty bowl, again
5.
a cat does not
appreciate
delicate rose petals
6.
window protection
the cat watches
curious world
7.
Little black cat,
lily pollen:
orange stripe
8.
wicked claws strike
on unsuspecting terrier.
9.
slumbering prowess:
it’s a hard
life
10.
yellow eyes yearn,
paw pads
koi pool waters
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EDIT: I know I am behind a little, trust me I will catch up over the next few days! I'm to try and write3-5 a day till I am back on board!
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ssh!
I wasn't going to do HaikuWriMo this year as I have other writing things on the go. However the nearer I got to the begining of February, the less I could resisit!
I did say something to `MSJames about using cat references in all 28 haiku, but we'll see.
Also- I thought it would be really funny to have this lovely picture of my own cat, Jaffa, who clearly doesn't approve of the snow!
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ssh!
I wasn't going to do HaikuWriMo this year as I have other writing things on the go. However the nearer I got to the begining of February, the less I could resisit!
I did say something to `MSJames about using cat references in all 28 haiku, but we'll see.
Also- I thought it would be really funny to have this lovely picture of my own cat, Jaffa, who clearly doesn't approve of the snow!
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day 2: point! i can imagine the face the kitten made: <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Wink/Razz" />day 3: oh man, this is comfort and relaxation epitomized in the person of a cat.
day 4: i'm too familiar with this one <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Big Grin)" />day 5: my cats even bit cactus and plastic flowers. anything that pokes out and gets in the way is to be eliminated. hmm.
day 7: lovely image, the orange stripe of pollen is so eye-catching.
day 8: ouch!
day 9: as this is grouped under the collection of CATkuwrimo, it is very apparent in meaning. if it was presented as a single, the main subject of the haiku will be unknown.
day 10: do you mean '<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Wink/Razz" />ats'?i wish you have more of these cat haiku. they really make me smile!
*a satisfied cat-lover reader purred approval*