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Taking a cliché phrase and being literal :D
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Hi there! Lily-Lucid here bringing you a bit of Critmas cheer on behalf of the Community Critmas 2018 team!

Well, that's a phrase I never thought of taking literally. :XD:

Great job! I really like it! I like how you got the perspective of this literal elephant in a room. I looove how petty he sounds, lol. And eager to be seen and to make a scene! Kinda reminds me of a little kid that's fed up with being ignored, haha. One thing I feel like would help things a bit would be to have the elephant actually trying to get the people's attention (ie. parading around the room, silently mimicking the person speaking from behind them, doing backflips, stuff like that). 
Other than that, I think it’s a really cute take on a popular phrase.